Whilst I'll say I enjoyed this (As I do with all of your work, by the way) I can see what a lot of people are saying. The transition was...dodgy. I actually enjoyed both parts of the song, but it must be said that they were too different to fit together!
The first part was a very nice build up to something different. Not part two of the song. The piano and violin I loved. It would be cool if you could extend part one with a new part two!
The second part is very cool and sounds like some sort of boss fight. Again, I feel this would make a nice song on its own. I especially enjoyed the introduction of the piano.
Thanks for the music though!
Merfy
Please note: Definitely not anything competition related. Sorry if normal minions aren't supposed to be writing reviews :L Even if the competition is over.